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  1. Michaelma March 14, 2017 / 6:38 pm

    Hello,

    is Sonnet the last part of the saga?

    Thanks.

    • freddieclegg March 16, 2017 / 1:47 pm

      Phil always expected Sonnet #57 to be the end but maybe he will think of some more adventures. Certainly I don’t plan any more.

  2. Sandy February 18, 2017 / 8:16 pm

    Phil & Freddie,

    You guys did it again. Chapter 21 has me wanting to cry thinking that this the end of Jenny and Joe. I know there is more to come. Keep up the great work.
    Sandy

    • freddieclegg February 20, 2017 / 9:53 am

      Well. there is some more, but I’m not sure about a new story.

  3. Sandy January 12, 2017 / 2:57 am

    Freddie, Any idea when Phil will have Chapter 19 ready? Looking forward to reading it.

    • freddieclegg January 12, 2017 / 9:43 am

      I’ll give them a prod. I’ve seen an “almost final” draft but not the real thing yet. Hopefully we won’t keep you waiting too long….

  4. Sandy December 13, 2016 / 3:10 pm

    Phil & Freddie, You guys did a great job with chap. 18. keep it up.

  5. sandy November 18, 2016 / 1:59 am

    Freddie, You and Phil keep hitting these stories out of the ball park. Great job with Chapter 15.

  6. Sandy B. September 26, 2016 / 10:51 pm

    Freddie, When is Chapter 13 going to be posted?

    • freddieclegg September 27, 2016 / 6:04 am

      I’ve just seen the final draft for the editors so soon, I hope.

  7. John August 24, 2016 / 5:23 pm

    Love the story!

    However, I feel like there may be a few too many sub-plots for its own good, with seemingly important plotlines being introduced, then ignored for extended periods of time. Petra, for example, shows up at the beginning of one story and then vanishes until the end, then shows up seven chapters into the next with very little progress having been made at all. Additionally, many of the sub-plots seem completely unrelated, with major characters only showing up as little more than cameo appearances in each other’s chapters.

    I feel that the story could use some trimming, with only one or two central characters instead of six or seven.

    • freddieclegg August 25, 2016 / 9:11 am

      I know Phil has wrestled with this and it’s been a challenge since the start of the story. I think some of what you are seeing is the result of trying to get more focus on Joe and Jenny while still tying up some of the loose ends from earlier parts of the tale which were written more than three years ago. Apologies if its too distracting, I understand what you mean. I looked back at “Market Forces” a while back and was horrified by the number of characters, even Larry remarks at the end that he’s been involved with 47 victims. I’m trying to use fewer characters these days (see Contractual Obligations where I’m keeping it down to a manageable number, I think, although there’s still a couple of others to come) I’ve passed your comment on to Phil too….

  8. peter August 13, 2016 / 4:46 pm

    Freddie. have read all the books and enjoyed each one and loved the psychology involved and I think the sex involved was irrelevant, hope there is more to the story.

    • freddieclegg August 20, 2016 / 3:40 pm

      Yes, there’s more to come> I’ve been off on hols for a week and have to post the stuff that’s turned up while I’ve been away. There should be another update in the next day or so.

  9. Bruno July 14, 2016 / 2:35 pm

    Is there a schedule for your chapter posting? I fell in love with Jenny since her first adventure in Thesis and i am glad that you continue her story. Keep the good work and keep her adventure plausible.

    • freddieclegg July 14, 2016 / 4:20 pm

      I am trying to post one chapter each week, usually on Wednesday. I’ve been away on a short break this week so haven’t managed to but I see I don’t have Chapter 6 from Phil yet, so I will chase him….

  10. Sandy B. July 9, 2016 / 1:10 pm

    Phil & Freddie, The story is going good so far. It made me go back to read “TFAC”. There is an inconsistency between the two stories. In “TFAC”, Anna T. flies into England using a passport of of Vyera. Then when Jenny is flown out of England on AKE’s airplane, her cover is a passport using her picture and the Vyera name. Anna T. is given a Estonian passport under the name of a secretary at AKE in London. Then Anna travels to Ireland by train and then get to Paris, where she recovers her own Russian passport to travel by to Moscow. There is no record of Anna T. entering the UK. BUT, in chapter 3 of Sonnet 57, MI6 is investigating Anna. This doesn’t jive to the other storyline.

    • freddieclegg July 9, 2016 / 4:22 pm

      I think that how we got here is that in Chapters 11 & 12 of “Touchdown” the patient that Dr Hahn was treating is identified as Anna T by the Medical Officer at Farnborough Airport in a discussion with Sgt Borland – Phil might add something but I seem to recall that was the basis of the plotting……

      • Sandy July 10, 2016 / 1:32 pm

        Freddie, I went back to “Touchdown” Chapter 11 like you suggested. The MO did give the police officer Anna T. name. BUT, it doesn’t match up with “TFAC” like I stated in my previous posting. Keep up the good work. Thanks for all the enjoyment that I have gotten for all your and Phil’s stories.

  11. mark June 29, 2016 / 4:45 pm

    it sounds very interesting and very plausable but really gentlemen there seems to too little sex and alot of plot laying etc , why not just get Jenny back to Kustkenvy or whatever his name is then get the whole family out to some remote spot in say China or the far east somewhere where no one knows or cares about them then have Jenny made into a breeder which was going to be the case if she and the black guy had sex and at the same time the American slave can be reunited with Jenny and they can be fucked side by side after the American has been hypnotised or something of the sort to make her forget her former life as clearly spending time with the Mistress in Moscow is not working , then when they have given birth they have a weeks recovery then gred from again when eventually they have bred out and their milk has stopped they can be sold to a bunch of cannibals who will take great delight in cutting up the American in front of Jenny and then eventually skinning Jenny alive and eating her flesh as it slowly falloff and is baked or roasted in the fire or in charcoal , just a thought it may be too way out for you and the authorities in the Uk although trying to pin this on the Russians find that the Russians have somehow vanished with the help of the Russian military Authorities or something of that order what do you think any good?

    • freddieclegg June 30, 2016 / 8:22 am

      Cannibalism certainly isn’t my scene and this all sounds too heavy from my perspective, but as Phil is plotting it, I’ll let him respond. “Plausable” was one of the aims here, so thanks for that!

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